From a story perspective, some additional questions to answer through the development of the plot would be:
- Why would a woman take in a drifter? Is she living with parents and they take the drifter in? Is this someone she knows and because of that feels safe? If so, whats the story there.
- Does the girl run away, or does the drifter run away?
- How does the father discover this?
- How does the father finish this?
- How will this dichotomy of "getting out" of the mountains be portrayed through the boyfriend?
- I'm wondering if a baby should be involved, i.e. does the girl become pregnant?
- How does it end?
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